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Fallen Hero: A poem in 3 parts by ~Enchanting-Immortal:iconEnchanting-Immortal:



Part One: Words Hurt

Pointless.
That's what my family said that day. That she's

Useless.
I wish it were something they wouldn't say. Apparently she's

Stupid.
They scorn her actions; they are nothing but

Hypocrites.
They are indeed, for they too were young once.



Part Two: My Turning Point

Pointless?
I think not, if she were not around I'd feel

Useless.
Even though she has kind of let me down, she's not

Stupid.
Don't call her that, she's not at all like you, you

Hypocrites.
She fell off the right track, well so have you.



Part Three: Serenade to My Fallen Hero

Please listen when I say these things,
You don't understand the pain it brings,
To hear you make fun of this girl,
The one who helped keep up my world,

My dear sweet friend, you I shall defend,
I shall stay by your side until the end,
I will not stray, I will not make fun,
I will hold your hand until this is done.

A laugh or scoff you shall not hear,
Not from my dear voice, so near,
I will support you as you fall,
Help you to stand, and through it all,

I will stay close and never go,
Always be the side of my fallen hero.
©2007-2009 ~Enchanting-Immortal
:iconenchanting-immortal:

Author's Comments

Kabira: To my fallen hero, I love her so very much, and she has no idea who she is. She'll probably never see this poem either...*sigh*

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:iconencasedxinxporcelain:
Aww I love it, Kaby-chan. You're such a good writer. I'm jealous lol.
:iconenchanting-immortal:
Kabira: heh, thanks :blush: It's not that good, really.....but thanks....

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Procrastinators of the World, unite...Tomorrow!
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WE ARE TEH ROCKER OF TEH SOCKS!
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Korn, cuz you just need your vegetables.
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We have trouble following directions, that's why we have all these restraining orders.
:iconencasedxinxporcelain:
Of course it's good. It's completely awesome ^^
:iconenchanting-immortal:
Kabira: :glomp: thank you.

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Procrastinators of the World, unite...Tomorrow!
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WE ARE TEH ROCKER OF TEH SOCKS!
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Korn, cuz you just need your vegetables.
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We have trouble following directions, that's why we have all these restraining orders.

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August 14, 2007
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